- reflect on the revision process - how did you decide what to revise, what did you revise, to what effect were your revisions, etc.
I am still stuck on figuring out what to do next. My piece had many techniques used in it that had a good effect. But it clearly lack two things: a flowing structure and a clear aim. I am currently working a rewording and editing phrases. But next I will need to make the piece be clear.... which I am have extreme trouble with. Most of my decisions on rewording were based on the fact that I didn't try reading it out loud. Plus that it was a major weakness clearly written in my letter. I am hoping tomorrow can give me insight in what I am failing to see.
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