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     The Bridegroom in Fredrico Garcia Lorca's Blood Wedding, is displayed as a weak-willed character that can't do much without others; illustrating the ignorance of a male characters to the truth around them.

Journal #4 - Blood Wedding

 Journal #4: Choose any two symbols that emerged in this scene and discuss their significance.  While you are certainly welcome to connect that significance to the entire text, I want you to focus on the details of how they are used in these first 12 pages.  Look at the stylistic choices surrounding their use and build up to a discussion on the role they play or will play in developing theme/character/setting/tension...




The two major symbols in the first 12 pages is: flowers and the knife. The knife is observably a weapon of murderous deeds. It has caused grief to a family, who has lost a brother and a father; a son and a husband.
To my understand, the description says "yellow room", but by the uneasiness and the fact they mention breakfast and needing a knife makes the setting into aged-yellow kitchen. The beginning follows through two main topics: the family's tragic and the marriage. Flowers were uses to describe the characters and scenic view. The true importance of them, I am not totally sure, but they appear as often as water and the horse throughout the play.

Journal #5 - The Stranger

• You will demonstrate your understanding of the importance of one's world view by scrutinizing your thoughts on how the world works and indentifying guiding principles for your own philosophy.
  

• A. Give it a name
• B. Identify seven to ten guiding principles: These should be clear and thoughtful – no clichés
• C. Explain from where each principle developed and why it is important

My name is I. I have many principles I follow. They are:

1. Optimism is the base of all sources of logic.
1. This holds a negative view to everything, making you question the facts and make attempts to rationalize, creating personal truths. This is mostly the based to a logical process, which in turn is the source to all logical understanding
2.  There is a contradiction to everything.
1. There are both light and dark in  life. There is good and bad. Everything includes none-thing, and none-thing eats everything.There is always something to argue and counter. Truth is a spectrum to reasoning.
3.  Learn your enemy; because your enemy can be an enemy in a friend.
1. Life is full of angry or dislike people. Many of us just think of them as enemies  because of things we heard, not know as a truth. This will create discrimination against others, leave a hate with no base.
4. Equality is a dream of the masses.
1. People try to strip their identities and subject to the masses, which will create standards. If an individual can guide a large section of the masses, then they can create revolutions or diction or a dominate power hold. It is believe that you must subject to the masses to not be destroy.
5. The Force is always with you.
1. Life is always believed that there is some higher power or mystery power. These Forces help us accept the facts of life with an easier ease. An live with a know purpose through things. 
6. Open-minded is the best way to acceptance.
1. Many things in life are hard to accept. These hard to accept truth or lies, can make things difficult to deal with and learn from. It creates narrow views of things and people. It creates criticisms and stereotypes. All leading to more difference and dislike.
7. Try moving forward, learn from the past, and be open to the future
1. Things are hard. Some drive us. Some destroy us. Life is full of valleys and cliffs. By learning, you grow. Growing is important to finding yourself.

Journal #4- The Stranger

• What conclusions does Mersault come to at the end of the novel. Does Camus want the reader to come to the same conclusions? 

Meursault at the end of the novel comes to the conclusion of 'no regrets'. Camus seems to be leading the reader to believe that Meursault, as strange as we see him, has actually had a purpose to his life. Camus is saying that Meursault had lived the way he wanted with no regrets. For he accepts the fact that he is being punishment for the crime he committed, as had the Arab that died received punishment for his actions.

Journal #2 - The Stranger

• Pick one of the following two prompts to respond to
• Option 1: What symbolic role does the sun/light play in the novel? What themes does this symbolism develop?
• Option 2: Evaluate the author's use of first person point of view. Why didn't Camus choose third person omniscient? How is his choice of point of view related to Camus' purpose/themes in the novel.

Option #2

   The author uses first-person view point to push a personal experience from Camus, himself. By writing in first-person, Camus is able to use his personal beliefs, like absurd, and personal experience, like his time in Paris. Although Camus does not get convicted to death, he uses first-person to demonstrate criticisms to those who don't follow society. For during his time of life, WWII had started and there was criticism against the Jews, and other effected races. In The Stranger, Camus uses many characters to illustrate this point. 

Journal # 1 - The Stranger

• Closely examine 3 of the minor characters Camus has introduced. How are the characters described and what role do they play? What is Camus trying to accomplish/reveal with each of these characters?

Marie Cardona: a former typist at Meursault's work. She becomes Meursault's girlfriend. But through the eyes of Meursault, we see as a desire in Meursault's life. Camus uses her to display that the protagonist does have wants and need, and that can display an uncontrol element in the protagonist's controlled/ logical approach to life.

Raymond Sint'es: a self-confedent "warehouse guard", rumored to be a "pimp" or  "a man to live off woman". He becomes Meursault's pal, and means to break the strandard of society. While we, the reader, can see the expressed bits of existentialism; it pushes the reasons why the Western culture views existentialism as the "beleif of immorality".

Old Salamano: an aging, yellowing old man and his skin diseased, beaten dog. He is Meursault's neighbor, and a reflection of interal expression vs. external expression. While outwardly Salamano appears to be voilent to his dog, he expresses himself to Meursault, after losting his dog, deeply passionate and caring affection to his dog. This displays to the reader that even if Meursault doesn't outwardly states that he loves his "Maman", small hints in describe languages shows that he cares.

Journal #5 - Their Eyes Were Watching God

•  Create a pastiche of Janie's description of Death on page 84. Match Hurston' style and themes as closely as possible. After you complete your pastiche, write a statement explaining some of the decisions you made in order to match Hurston's writing and objectives.

  Keth began to know Lost. Lost, a shadow that sticks to the Journey. The dark-pool follows without intent, and without reason. What reason needs Lost to follow, and who intents to find him? He stands beyond all reason to behold the mind. Never needs to waits, wanders blind, with hands extended forward. Already there, holding on. Never to guess when the black door encloses him in. He too held by fear and doubt. Oh why Rim! She ought not have left by herself. Sent Gernt to guide her back, but Rim reassured them she will be Fine. These friend wuz all right with the Ugly understanding, but they didn't see the shadow in her situtation. She was to be alright if the torch had the light. She wasn't to be pulled in. This is what she believed. But Gernt saw it too, so he knew her fate. If she hadn't light it, he was to be positive that people will gather under the icy rain. Fog rolls in with the desire to fill the search. The shadows begin playing mockery of men. Hope, a shining light, warming the people; that she will be found.

Journal #6 - Their Eyes Were Watching God

•  reflect on the revision process - how did you decide what to revise, what did you revise, to what effect were your revisions, etc.

I am still stuck on figuring out what to do next. My piece had many techniques used in it that had a good effect. But it clearly lack two things: a flowing structure and a clear aim. I am currently working a rewording and editing phrases. But next I will need to make the piece be clear.... which I am have extreme trouble with. Most of my decisions on rewording were based on the fact that I didn't try reading it out loud. Plus that it was a major weakness clearly written in my letter. I am hoping tomorrow can give me insight in what I am failing to see.

Journal #3 - Their Eyes Were Watching God

• Find quotations for five different stylistic attributes of Hurston's writing. Craft an insightful analysis for two of the quotations that explains how the style impacts the text.

1. Personification - " With kissing bees inging of the beginning of the world! " (pg 11)
2. Imagery -  " Nanny's head and face looked like the standing roots of some old tree that had been torn away by storm. [...] The cooling palma christi leaves that Janie had bound about her grandma's head with white rag had wilted down and become part and parcel of a woman. Her eyes didn't bore and pierce. " (pg 12)
3. Simile - " Did marriage compel love like the sun the day? " (pg 20)
4. Motif - " Oh to be a pear tree----any tree in bloom. " (pg 11)
5. Allusion - " 'De nigger woman is de mule uh de world so fur as Ah can see.' " (pg 14)

Analysis

4. " Oh to be a pear tree----any tree in bloom. " (pg 11). This motif of a tree in Hurstons writting creates an image of change, growth; and a symbol of feelings and the change what happens in Janie's life. In this moment in the text, Janie's uses the pear tree to express the love she feels and how it blosom.

5. " 'De nigger woman is de mule uh de world so fur as Ah can see.' " (pg 14). This allusion relates to the effects of slavery as well as women's oppression in the era Hurston have live and learn. But in relevants to the novel, this can foreshadow to the event of the mule and how it gives power to Joe, oppressing Janie.

Journal #2 - Their Eyes Were Watching God

•  Create a dialect of your choosing and list seven of the rules for that dialect. Remember that dialect rules can include grammar, pronunciation, and vocabulary. This website is an interesting source for English dialect ideas and details. When you have created your dialect you will pick one page from Their Eyes Were Watching God that contains both narration and dialogue and mimic that page's style as authentically as possibly.

 Dialect Rules: 

1. "-ow" ending words now end with "-owz"
2. All "-y" ending words, except when next to a vowel, now end with "-ie"
3. "-ing" changed to "-eng"
4. "Yes" to "Yep"
5. "-oo-" words loses the last letter and replaced with a " ' "
6. "a" to "ae"

Passage 

      He had almost everything going for him. Money, style, and a goal. He told me he had hit more than one obstacle in his life. After a few more drinks, he continued telling me about his old job. The company boss was strict and had it out for him since the start. Everything he did, he did with excellent showmanship and effort, but his boss would degrade his work. Even with all his efforts, most fell down the drain. So he left, with a goal of finding the place he hear of that was look for his skills. "So hows it goeng for you?"
      "Unemployed, lost ae job to ae fire. Been unemployed for days."
      " Ae fire? Nows hows that to stop you from getteng ae new one? You loo' like you got ae head on thoughs shoulders."
     "No one is hireng out here. Barilie makeng it through odds and ends around town."
    They sat in silents for a little bit, drinking a few more times before He replied, "Hows you come with me?"
     "Is there ae position open?"
     "It is just starteng up, and they are loo'eng for people. You should come."
     "Yep, I think I will join you. When do we leave?"
     "Tomorrow."

Journal #1 - Their Eyes Were Watching God

• Reader response: How do you perceive Janie? How do you perceive the narrator? Be thorough and thoughtful and use textual evidence to defend your answer.

Janie is perceived as a beautiful ( "[...] her firm buttocks like she had grape fruits... still it was a hope that she might fall to their level some day" (pg 2). ),

middle-aged women ( "She's way past forty to my knowledge, Pheoby." (pg 3). )

who have suffered some hardships and still can stand strong ( "Aw, pretty good, Ah'm tryin' to soak some uh de tiredness and de dirt outa mah feet." (pg 4). ).

The narrator is perceived as a situation-creator. In the beginning, the narrator starts the reader on a journey from man to woman. And the woman is then placed within a situation of grief ("So the beginning of this was... their eyes flung open in judgement." (pg 1). ). But later creates a situation of comforting ("Pheoby hurried on off with... back porch with the lamps all filled and the chimneys cleaned." (pg 4). ).

Post #3 - Euphemism

• Pick one technique from the list you received today and create a post in which you elaborate on that technique. You need to bulk these up a bit from last nights. Use literary examples (not just from the internet but from one of your summer novel). Be sure you really get it before you try to reword it. Explain why it is important. Use images that will help you remember it.

Euphemism- "the substitution of a mild, indirect, or vague expression forone thought to be offensive, harsh, or blunt. " [http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/euphemism] From The Stranger, in the beginning, Meursault describes the death of his Maman and how everyone uses the "lost" or "deceased" when talking about his Maman to him.

An image: http://hoatv.homestead.com/20061128a-euphemism.gif

Post #2 - Atmosphere

• Pick one technique from the list you received today and create a post in which you elaborate on that technique. Explain it in detail. Why is it important? Give examples.

Atmosphere- "The overall feeling in a passage." This is a set environment for the reader to receives a message to the written piece itself. This is not centered focus, like tone, on one subject or character, but a wider reflection on the emotion in the piece.


For example: 

Post #1

1. Which of the three books did you enjoy the most and why?

The Stranger is the one I most enjoyed. The simple honest character, the negative atmosphere around Meusault, the contrasts between lights and darks, and the one way percipience. Unlike most assigned reads, I have felt myself drawn into the life of Meusault.

2. Which of the three books did you enjoy least and why?

Their Eyes Were Watching God was the book I least enjoyed and have not been able to completely finish. The extensive uses of dialogue and, what I found, very difficult to relate.

3. If you were to write an essay on the third novel (the book not addressed in the previous two questions) what element or elements would you focus on in that essay and why do think they are important?

WE...the element I would mainly focus on and research is the factors of society. The story circles around the idealism of Marxism. By uses of materials and the daily focus we as people put in them compared to this reality of a huger Benefactor.